This is what peer review, teacher feedback, and group workshops are for. In college I didn’t need an llm to critique my work. That was the job of my classmates, and mine for their writing. And for those outside of college, you can still just seek out writing circles, either irl or online. It takes some work, but you’ll get better feedback from real humans who can actually feel the emotion in your writing. You can also seek out similar communities for other hobbies. The only reason for someone to pick an ai critique over a human one is convenience and the cost is way too high to justify that